Brilliantly written but too long

The true story of two bereaved fathers, an Israeli and a Palestinian who are determined to use their experiences to bring the nationalities together. I felt the narrative technique, whilst occasionally profound, made for a disjointed read and did not add much to the story. My main problem with the book is that does not really tell the true story and effects of the Israeli annexation and occupation of another country and the enforced removal of that country’s culture and history. Please see link for a proper explanation of my concerns. https://www.aljazeera.com/opinions/2020/3/11/apeirogon-another-colonialist-misstep-in-commercial-publishing